I hope you are home abiding by the
lock-down rules, staying healthy, spending time with your family and keeping
yourself busy. It has been a while we chatted, hence thought of checking on
you. I am grateful you all liked the
previous story And then the first few drops fell...
Many of you asked if I have other
stories to share. Surely, there are many. Today’s one is a personal favorite of
mine.
Many years ago, in a remote
village of Bengal, there lived a rich man. The man and his wife had no
children. Desperate to have a child, they consulted many doctors. They even kept
fasts, chanted mantras, visited holy men, fed the poor and donated huge sums
for charity. They hoped all of these or at least one of the advices would help
them. Sadly, none worked, and they were bereft of the joy of being a parent.
One day, while they are returning
from a trip to a mountain shrine, they passed through a jungle. Suddenly, the wife
pulled her husband’s sleeve. Do you hear? Or am I hallucinating, she asked teary
eyed? The man cupped his ear and tried to listen carefully. Yes, he exclaimed,
it seems like a baby crying! Frantically, they started combing the area, and to
their utter surprise, found an infant wrapped in a banana leaf dumped
mercilessly behind a thorny bush. The wife let out a wail, how can someone be
so cruel? Saying this she picked up the baby and clung it to her heart.
Seasons passed and soon the baby
became a toddler. They named him Aryamaan. The man and his wife did not let
him out of their sight even once. He had princely clothes to wear and the cook
was instructed to prepare the choicest delicacies for him each day. His room
was filled with toys of all shapes, colors and sizes. Imported ones lined the
racks. When Aryamaan went to school, an attendant would escort him, wait for
the entire duration and accompany him back.
When at home, half a dozen people waited on him all the time.
Now all this pampering got into
the boy’s head. He became fussy and started throwing tantrums at the slightest
of pretexts. Initially, the man and his wife mistook all of this to be a child
demanding attention, and they plied him on with more pampering. Nothing helped.
The boy knew he could always have his way in the house, especially around his
parents. And this made him even more obstinate. The worst affected were his
toys. Poor things! He would chew them, tear them apart, stomp over them, hammer
them till they broke, or stash them away in some corner of the house. The
imported ones stopped exciting him the day they arrived, one look, and he would
get over them, never to re look again.
The man and wife were completely
at their wits end. They tried every trick in the book to please him, but the
more they tried, the more recluse Aryamaan became. He would now shut himself in
his room, and all they heard was the noise of toys being broken or his shrieks.
There were days he even refused food. The once doting parents could only watch
their son helplessly from a distance.
Now in the same house, unaware of
all this drama, lived another boy. Raghu was the same age as Aryamaan. He was
Rajaram, the rich man’s gardener’s son. Raghu lived in the attendant’s quarter
with his father. His mother died while giving birth to him. The room they occupied
was very sparse - a cot, few utensils, a cloth line to hang clothes and a
derelict table fan. Their only luxury! During the hot summer months, one could
hear the fan noisily humming away, trying its best to provide some relief from
the sweltering heat.
During the day while Rajaram
tended to the rich man’s garden, Raghu would keep himself busy with a ragged
teddy bear. He had found it lying in a corner of the garden. It was love at
first sight for both. Raghu called him Bhalu. Both friends set on many an
expedition and adventure together. They climbed tall mountains, sailed on
turbulent seas, rode wild elephants, hunted ferocious tigers, sipped the nectar
of strange flowers (the secret to their superpowers!) Just the other day, they
had tamed a dinosaur and made it their ride. The dinosaur took them to a magic
castle which was full of toys. Every toy in the world was there. Ah, what innocent
fun they had! Both would laugh together, rolling on the floor, over the jokes
Raghu shared. Rajaram, stealing glances from his work, also joined in sometimes
to have a light moment with his son. Life was indeed beautiful!
One day, while Raghu was regaling
Bhalu with the story of the flying elephant who could also swim, the rich man dropped
by. He had come looking for Rajaram, when suddenly, the warmth and mirth in
Raghu’s laugh caught his attention. How can anyone laugh with such gay abandon?
He stopped by their room, and peered in. The sight that greeted him, almost
took his breath away! Raghu was lying on the floor with the teddy on his chest
and talking animatedly. In between, he would squeal with delight, and then
laugh raucously. It seemed he was having the time of his life. The rich man
watched spellbound. He had never seen such a happy child before!
That evening he called Rajaram to
meet him. Bring your son too, he asked. When the father and son came, they
found the man and his wife waiting for them. Crestfallen, the rich man narrated
his ordeal. He lamented, I am a failed father, however hard I try, I can never
make my son happy, he never smiles let alone laugh. As a father I want to make one last effort.
With folded hands, he turned to Raghu. Son, I have seen how happy you are all
the time, and the great bond you have with this teddy. It seems to me that this
toy is the source of all your happiness, if you give this to Aryamaan, he too
shall be happy. A helpless father is asking this of you. Please don’t refuse. The wife too nodded
pleadingly.
Raghu was standing there tightly
holding onto the teddy. The next moment, he handed over his only possession, his best friend Bhalu to the rich man. And
then, he turned around, took his father’s hand and both walked away. Not once
did Raghu look back.
Let us all be like Raghu. Selfless
love, innocent laugh, seeking pleasures in whatever life offers. And, then at
the first available opportunity, eager to give it all away. Not caring even if
it is one's most prized possession. The world today needs more of Raghus. A little
love will surely heal this broken world.
Well, if you liked today’s story,
do share your comments and feedback at chakraborty.ashish@gmail.com. Until
next time, stay blessed and happy! And be a Raghu in someone’s life if you can be.
Wonderful
ReplyDeleteA deep msg indeed πππ
Thanks Smita, glad you liked this effort.
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ReplyDeleteLovely story with a sound moral. However, it seemed to end abruptly as it didn't talk about the effect shabby teddy had on morose Aryamaan. However, a reader can extrapolate that from the description. Overall, a great read as usual.
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Thanks so much Bantu, always great to have your feedback!
DeleteMoral of the story is bang on. The last para almost made me cry.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much you liked it Nirupma
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful story with a very great message. Selfless love, doing for others a child should be nurtured with all these qualities!✨πΈπ«
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Charu :)
DeleteThis also teaches how a child can ruin his/her life if not taken care and virtued properly. Immense love and fulfilling unnecessary demands and not rebuking in time may lead the his/her way towards hell. The place where all the judgements will go in vain and good/bad becomes just one for the child.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for this feedback, appreciate your taking time and reading :)
DeleteSo well written, vivid in imagination, with such a powerful yet poignant message. If we all become like Raghu, our world would be happy with us, and we would be happy with the world.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, appreciate this feedback and also glad you liked my effort, be in touch
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ReplyDeleteInteresting story with a good moral.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteI loved it so much. What word choice. A great message shared. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pooja appreciate your feedback :)
DeleteGrand initiative
ReplyDeleteAshish, I am so very happy to return to tales of my childhood. Just the kind of story with a lasting impact and beautiful language. You have indeed brought back simplicity and warmth in the art of storytelling. Kudos. Waiting for more!
ReplyDeleteThat is such a warm message, thank you so much, be in touch :)
DeleteIt's always a pleasure when we connect. So surely, will be in touch. Good luck!
DeleteDear Ashish,
ReplyDeleteWhat an endearing story and your style of storytelling makes it that much more effective. I am taken back in time to a young family of two brothers who had similar experiences. May God bless you and may there be many more to follow.
Thank you so much Sir means a lot to me, you are such an integral part of my life :)
DeleteDear Mr.Chakraborty,
ReplyDeleteI was fully engrossed in the story so much that I almost found myself in the same house and watching Aryamaan and Raghu. Very nicely written with a strong moral left behind. A good lesson to all parents who pamper their child so much, that eventually the child grows up as a bad human being.
I would have loved the story to continue and eager to know whether the teddy bear eventually changed Aryamaan's attitude. May be you will complete the story in another episode.
Nice reading. Really enjoyed.
Best wishes and happy writing.
Arun Kumar Roy
Thank you so much Mr.Roy, blessed to have this feedback from you, and blessed to have you always guide me
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