Once upon a time there lived a girl named Ella.
Her mother died when she was a
child. The father had to be away for work, so he sent Ella to his sister’s
place.
The sister or Aunt Molly was not
good to Ella at all. She made her do all the household work – washing,
cleaning, scrubbing, cooking, fetching water and even chopping firewood. Poor
Ella worked hard all day long. She was not even allowed to go to school.
The hard work made Ella look shabby
all the time. Her hands were rough, her hair matted, her clothes torn, and
there was ash (from the cooking she did) all over her.
Aunt Molly had a daughter named Eureka.
The mother and daughter made fun of Ella and laughed at her condition. They
even called her Cinderella, cinder meaning ash, as Ella was always covered with
ash and soot from the kitchen work.
Ella was a strong girl; she did
not pay much attention to all these taunts. After work, when her aunt and
sister retired to bed, she would stay awake and study by the kitchen lamp. She
had managed to hide few books her father had given her. If Aunt Molly got to
know, she would surely tear them.
Ella knew she would not stay in
this house for ever. She was just waiting for an opportunity!
And it came soon!
The king was getting old and he wished
the Prince to marry soon and ascend the throne. To find a suitable bride for
the prince, the king decided to host a royal party and invited all the young
girls of his kingdom. His idea was that the prince could choose a suitable wife,
the future queen, for himself.
When the news reached Ella, she
was very happy. She wanted to attend the royal party to dance and enjoy. She had
never gone out anywhere and this was one such opportunity. She knew that the
prince would not choose a common and ordinary girl like her, hence she was not too
worried about any party makeup or dress.
When Aunt Molly came to know of
Ella’s plan, she started screaming.
“Are you out of your mind, no one
will allow such a dirty and filthy girl as yourself in the royal palace. You will stay
home and finish all the work; I will take Eureka there. Is that clear?”
This made Ella sad!
Yet, she did
not lose hope. Something in her told that she would surely meet the prince that evening.
Ella was busy washing utensils when
she felt a cool and fragrant breeze blowing about. She felt the presence
of a kindly light in the kitchen. She heard a tinkling sound and a soft laughter
from near her.
She thought she must be dreaming
and rubbed her eyes. When she opened them, she was startled to see a fairy
standing next to her. The fairy smiled and gently caressing her said, “Don’t
worry Ella, you shall surely attend the royal party. Now close your eyes for a
minute please.”
Ella did as she was asked. When
she opened them, she found she was wearing the most beautiful silken gown, a
colorful tiara studded with diamonds was nestled on her head, and on her feet were
silver shoes.
Ella thought she must be dreaming
again. The fairy gently scolded her, “Ella, you must hurry up in case you wish
to meet the prince. A carriage is waiting outside to take you to the palace. Please
have fun.”
Ella thanked the fairy and was
about to leave when the fairy stopped her.
She said, “Wait a minute Ella. I am sure you will have a great time at
the party, however, remember this magic spell will wear off by 12:00AM. Please
come back before that, after 12:00AM you will become the original Ella.”
Ella nodded in agreement and
hurried to the waiting carriage.
As she reached the palace gates,
the guards thought she was a princess from another kingdom. When she went in,
everyone stared at her in surprise. No one looked as elegant as Ella that evening.
When the prince saw her, he immediately
wanted to dance with her. Ella had a great time. She enjoyed as never before.
She sang and danced, had good food and made many friends.
Dong, dong, dong, dong…
What was that?
Suddenly Ella remembered.
Good Lord!
The royal clock was striking twelve!
In all the joy of the evening Ella
had completely forgotten about the magic spell and what the fairy had told her.
What should she do now?
She dropped whatever she was
doing and bolted for the door. She had to reach the carriage somehow before the
clock struck full twelve.
She muttered to herself, “Hurry
up Ella, hurry up, else it will be too late.”
It was too late by then!
The clock had struck full twelve.
The magic spell ended, and Ella froze.
She was her original self –
shabby, messy hair, torn clothes and ash all over her body!
The prince’s jaw fell open!
The musicians stopped playing!
In the entire hall there was pin
drop silence!
Everyone stared at Ella in
disbelief!
Then someone started screaming.
It was Aunt Molly. “Ella, how dare you come here, I had asked you
not to. Have you finished all the household chores? Wait till you return home,
and I shall show you your rightful place.”
Eureka felt ashamed and started sobbing.
By now, the other girls had
formed a circle around Ella.
Shame! Shame! Shame!
They mocked her and made fun of her.
Ella stood still; her head held
high.
She was not embarrassed of her condition.
She rather looked proud.
Finally, the prince spoke.
“Silence everyone! Not a word
anymore. If I see or hear anyone making fun of Ella, I shall get the person
arrested.”
He then turned to Ella and offered
her a seat. He asked the royal servants to get her a glass of water. Once Ella was comfortable, he gently asked her
to tell him her complete story.
Ella told him everything…
How Aunty Molly made her work and
not let her study…
How Eureka made fun of her…
How eager she was to attend the
royal party…
How the fairy helped her…
At last, she told the prince
about the magic spell.
The prince listened to Ella in
rapt attention. After she had narrated her story, he realized how brave Ella is.
“Ella, tell me how I can help you?”
he asked. “If you wish, I can get your aunt and sister imprisoned for the
way they have treated you,” he added.
Ella knew this was the chance she
had been waiting for long.
She smiled at the prince and
said, “Thank you Sir, I do not wish my aunt and sister to go to jail, I forgive
them.”
She further added, “I want to
study further. I want to become a doctor so that I can help the poor and the
needy.”
The prince was very happy and
really felt proud that someone so brave lived in his kingdom. He ensured
everything Ella wished for.
Today Dr. Ella is the royal physician.
She nursed the old king back to life when he fell very sick.
She is loved and admired by all
for being kind and courageous.
She is a role model for all young girls in the kingdom.
The fairy’s magic had finally cast its spell.
Good read !! Interesting
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ReplyDeleteVery good thinking. It is much more practical oriented than the original Cinderella. Also has some lessons to learn. Congratulations. Keep writing.
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DeleteI like this ending more than original Cinderella story.. thank you dada
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ReplyDeleteLoved the twist! 😀
ReplyDeleteGreat translation of Fairy's magic into our current practical world. Such twists in these classics will enable smooth transition from childhood to adolescence! Keep sharing such great stuff. Thank you
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